Saturday, 19 October 2013



Woah! Can’t believe it’s been almost 2 years since am writing! Well, all thanks to my crazy mind which manages to come up with mad stuff! And also, a big thank you to television characters Maan & Geet from the Indian serial Geet- Hui Sabse Parayi as they are the sole reason behind my attempting to think & write a story on the first place!

Thank you to all my readers who have supported & loved my works.

Read on....The fun begins!

Thursday, 17 October 2013

Chapter Twenty Nine: The Rival's Not-So-Honey Trap!

"Man! I really hope our assignment is selected..." Riya was tensed, "We will get a chance to represent our college in Inter-college fashion event!"

"Yeah! It's a big thing for us. Lets hope for the best." added Juhi.

The girls waited patiently outside the staff room. Geet paced to & fro in anguish & anticipation. The selection was very important for her as well. She had been waiting for the fashion event since long.

Just then Aniee came out of the staff room. The trio looked at her expectantly. There was grave silence. Aniee took a deep breath.

"Guys, our assignment is rejected."

All were very shocked. At first they thought that Aniee was joking but then she was not. The girls grew extremely sad & dejected. Geet was even more hurt.

"We had worked so hard for this...but now what's the use..." rued Juhi.

Failure was something Aniee had never faced before. She was angry & frustrated.
"You know what!! It's all because of Geet!!! I had told not to use her designs!!!!!!!" she blamed her.

That was a huge blow to Geet but she didn't retort as she knew Aniee was right. Without saying a word, Geet left from there trying to evade the tears that were forming in her eyes.

She walked aimlessly on the road until she reached the hostel...She went & stood near the window. A cold breeze blew past her. The sky was cloudy hiding the sun rays with them...The day seemed to be submerged in grief...

                                    Narration By Geet

All of a sudden, my life seems to fall apart. I feel so helpless, so unwanted. When Maan is there with me, everything is perfect & when he is not, nothing is right...I had never imagined I would fall for him but that's life! Now, I have no other choice but to be happy seeing Maan & Simi together. The reality is hard & on your face!! It pains a lot...I feel like crying out loud but I know I have to be strong. I was so sure I would be selected for the fashion event which would help me divert my mind & heart from Maanji but now that's also not possible...Life feels so barren that I have lost myself in it's unbearable loneliness...

                                        End Of Narration.

Her phone buzzed. It was her father. She answered the call.

"Geet beta?? Are you alright?? Sab theek hai na??" asked Mohinder sensing something to be wrong in her voice.

"Nothing like that Papa...I am fine." she assured him.
"Beta, If anything is troubling you then tell me! I am always there for you!"

"Nahi bus woh...pressure of exams & studies...Very tiring..."  she made an excuse.

"Yes! I know studying about finance & markets is difficult but I also know my daughter can handle everything!"

Geet weakened further hearing that & she was overcome with tremendous guilt. She was even lying to her family.

"And yes! Read newspapers regularly so that you know what's currently happening in the share markets! That will help you in your exams!"  Mohinder added.

That completely broke Geet. She somehow held herself together while speaking to him after that. He inquired further about her health after which he rang off.

And then, Geet broke down. Tears gushed through her eyes incessantly...She was keeping her family, who loved her so much, in dark.

"There is nothing to be guilty about. You just concentrate on your goals & leave the rest to me. After all, you know how I handle situations, right?"  

Geet recollected Maan's words that he had told her on that rainy night. She sobbed even more...


"Damn it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"  Maan tossed his phone in agony, "Geet's phone is switched off!!!!!"

"But seriously Bro!!! This is just amazing!!!"

Aniee was awestruck with the inquisitive arrangements for Maan's dinner date with Geet . It depicted his intense love for her in the most passionate way possible .The venue in question was the beautiful & extremely cozy sea-facing farmhouse owned by the Khurana.

"Dad had gifted this place to Mom on their tenth wedding anniversary na?" Aniee's voice turned emotional, "I miss her bro! I wish she would have been alive today..."

Tears formed in her eyes. Maan too was affected. He hugged her, kissing her forehead. There was silence that followed.

Wiping the moisture away from her eyes, she parted from him.

"Leave everything to me Bhai! I will bring Geet here for you." said Aniee, clearing her voice.

She left soon after.

"Geet will be mine after this night." Maan lighted the candle on the table...


Simi had that evil & impish smile on her face as she darkened her red lip liner & eye shadow. She chose an extremely seductive & revealing dress to wear & her face dawned heavy sensual make-up. She was at her sexiest best.

"Tonight I will have you on the bed with me MSK!!! And then, all your wealth will soon be mine too!"  



Geet arrived at the lobby where Aniee was waiting for her.

"Why have you come over here? Is there anything else for which you have to blame me?" Geet asked hoarsely.

"Will you listen to me first & then speak???!!!!!" she countered ruefully.

Geet looked away from her. Aniee cooled down & took a deep breath.

"Look! I know I shouldn't have said that to you. I want to compensate for that. There is a small party in my farmhouse. Juhi & Riya are coming too. I want you to come with me."

"I don't want to go anywhere." Geet refused point blank.

She was to leave but Aniee stopped her.

"It's a request to you to come to the party. Please."

That startled Geet.


Aniee was successful in bringing Geet along. They were in the car.
 Then Aniee faked a call & pretended to talk on the phone.

 "Geet, I have some important work at home. You go to the farmhouse. Juhi & Riya have reached. I will join you all as soon as I can."

Geet nodded slowly, taking her words. Aniee got off the car & the driver drove Geet to the farmhouse.

Aniee called up Maan, "Bro, she is coming there!"

A passionate smile crept from the edges of his lips...

Maan dimmed the lights of the farmhouse & waited with extreme patience for Geet. He sat on the couch. Her thoughts were making him more desperate. His heart possessively demanded her closeness. He wanted to lock her in his arms, to hold her & feel her...He was breathing in her images that his mind played...

"What happened to the lights?"    

Maan was shocked when all the lights suddenly went off & the room turned dark.

Just then he saw a female figure stepping in through the door. The breeze blew the candles away. Even though the faint white light didn't make the figure visible enough, he was sure it had to be Geet...


"Damn it!!!! It's so dark here!!" Geet exclaimed as the driver dropped her at the gate.

She cautiously walked in, not able to see anything.
"Ouch!!!" her foot hit a pebble, "Where are Juhi & Riya??!! Koi nahi hai yahan pe!! Am I here to party with the ghosts & vampires??!!!!"Geet was irritated.


The female figure walked towards Maan & before he could realize, she threw herself on him. She hugged him sensually flickering her hands on his back & rubbed her bosoms seductively against his torso...For a moment, he was deluded & enticed and hugged her back...but the very next split second, he realized she was NOT Geet...

But it was too late as at that point, the lights turned on & Geet stood there at the door, extremely aghast seeing Maan & Simi hugging intimately. A reign of trauma overtook as her insides broke completely...Her heart froze as nothing could have been shattering than this. Maan jerked Simi away. His eyes were horrified when it met that of Geet's...He was shocked to his very existence seeing her pale white & lifeless form. Tears trickled down her eyes in a dead manner manner & it was unbearable for him to her that way...

Simi smirked devilishly seeing her plan work. A killing silence mingled in the aura. Geet felt her feet give away & she was just about to collapse but she somehow held herself & ran from there.

"Geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he wanted to go behind her but Simi stopped him by his arm.

"How dare you???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he roared in anger, harshly jerking her hand away, "If I had a gun, I swear I would have shot you by now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he barked aggressively.

"MK! What is so special in her that I don't have in me!!!! She is nothing compared to me!!!! Can't you give me another chance???!!! I can satisfy you in ways that she can't & you know that!!!!! !!" Simi was obsessive.

Maan's disgust for her knew no bounds.

"If you claim to be a super model, then make it crystal clear in your stink brain that Geet is the heroine of my life!!!!! She will undoubtedly be MINE because she was, is & will always remain MINE!!!!! And you have to pay a huge price for hurting her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

His words echoed in Simi's ears as he left from there. A chill of fear ran down her spine... His voice was deadly cold...He evinced violence. Maan looked even more dangerous than a wounded ferocious lion...


Geet somehow reached her hostel & broke down into tears closing the door of her room behind her. She cried uncontrollably falling on the bed. She felt neither alive nor dead. Her mind began to play all the flashbacks right from the time she had met Maan & every moment with him. Tears gushed through her eyes like never before. The pain that she felt in her entire soul made her realize the extreme to which she had crazily fallen for Maan...He  was her first love & will remain her last love forever. May be, she had expected Simi & Maan to patch up but she was too weak to see that happen. She wasn't the sacrificing type to be happy seeing them together. Geet so wished she had a heart of stone or no heart at all...   

Her head felt heavy & her eyes were was destiny who betrayed her...


Maan swiftly drove towards her hostel. He tried to call Geet infinite times but her phone was switched off. The window of her room was closed. It began raining very heavily. He knew she wouldn't be in a position to hear anything now. Also, he didn't want to add to her troubles by sneaking inside the hostel at such an odd hour...

Chapter Twenty Eight: Arrival Of The Rival!

"Geet!!!!! Walls have better ears than you I guess!!"

Aniee shook her for the trillionth time which finally brought Geet back to her senses!

"H-Huh...! Wh-at?" she responded completely flustered & saw Juhi, & Riya eyeing her with raised eyebrows. After all, no one had the rarest of the rarest clue of what had happened with her sometime back...!

"Ah! Finally we are done with our assignment! That calls for a celebration!" chirped Juhi.

"Yeah! And Geet" Riya turned to her, "We have taken your designs as the base!"

"I hope because of Geet, our designs don't get rejected. " cringed Aniee.

But Geet was in her own trance. Her heart pounded  as her mind played her intimacy with Maan again & again.

"This can't be true...I was imagining everything..." her voice died down in her breathlessness.

Her "queries" were cleared once she saw Maan descending the stairs. His gazes at her indicated every bit of their intimacy was a reality. She controlled her erratic breaths & diverted her eyes from him.

"Uh...Lets go out for dinner to celebrate!" Geet suggested to the girls.

They agreed. Geet just wanted to quickly get out of there. Juhi & Riya bade a dreamy bye to Maan!

Just then his phone rang.

"Yes Karan *pause* Meeting for your fashion show?*pause* Okay, I will be there in a while."

Maan rang off!


 "Hmm...what to order?" Riya wondered looking at the menu in the restaurant.

Geet dug herself in the menu book trying to cast aside Maan's thoughts.

"Hey, Look there guys!" Juhi's voice fell on her ears & she looked up, "Isin't it MSK with Simi Singhania??"

Both Aniee & Geet was stunned to see both of them together! Actually Karan too was there with them but from where the girls sat, it appeared only Maan & Simi were there!
Simi gave a seductive smile to Maan who didn't know she would accompany Karan. Maan IGNORED her point blank & spoke to Karan! Simi cringed!

Geet felt a dagger piercing her heart seeing Maan & Simi sitting a distance away while her friends continued talking about them. She clutched the menu book in jealousy & anger!

"Did MSK patch up with Simi???? Why did he patch up yaar!!!!" Riya exclaimed, sorrowfully!
"Enough guys!!!!!!!" Geet was irked, "Don't you have anything better to discuss except Maan &  Simi??!!!!!!!!Disgusting!!!!"

"Aree! What happened to her?" wondered Juhi as Geet walked out of there. Aniee was tensed.


"Babaji ! I have never lost control over myself  like that!"Geet squeezed her eyes in frustration.

When she turned, she was shocked to see Simi standing there!

"It's good I have got you here! I, anyways wanted to have a talk with you!" Simi approached her pretending to be genuine & nice, "You see I really love MSK & I am trying my level best to bring him back in my life. I know he loves me madly too but he is cross with me. And so to forget about me, he is trying to get close to you. I know how much ever he tries, he won't be able to hate me. We were in a very passionate relationship. I love him a lot & want him to be with me just like before."

Simi's words acted like thorns to Geet. Her heart sank with pain & she stood there numb & dead. Geet felt her entire world colliding & breaking down into countless pieces...She had never experienced such tremendous pain was killing her but she had to be strong...Simi smirked inwardly as Geet believed her words.

"I know what you are trying to say!" Geet cleared her choked voice, "Don't worry! I have absolutely no feelings for Maan..."

Simi grinned evilly as Geet left.

"Hmm...This was easy! Kamini aunty was right! This Geet is too innocent to be fooled. The game has begun!" Simi smiled devilishly...

Geet joined her friends back in the restaurant. She was completely shattered from with but she knew reality had a hard face & she could, in no way, between Maan and Simi.

Aniee suggested playing Truth or Dare. All agreed. Geet took Truths everytime & gave blunt replies. She just sat there motionless throughout, completely unaware of her surroundings. The bottle, after a while, turned again at her,

"Geet, Truth or Dare?" asked Riya.


"What is this yaar!" Juhi exclaimed her displeasure, "You have taken so many truths before, now you have to take dare. That's final!!"

Geet shook her head for a no.

"Leave it Juhi. Are you expecting her to take a dare! What a joke!" Aniee taunted.

"What is the dare?!!!!" Geet asked sharply.

"I saw my brother going to the terrace. Go there and hug & kiss him."

Geet gaped at her in shock.

"I am not going to do any such dare, understand?!!!!!!" she retorted, her heart was beated violently.

"No problem. Aniee, can I kiss him on her behalf?" Riya asked excitedly. Juhi too asked the same thing but Aniee's eyes were fixed on Geet.

Geet rose & staged a walkout.

"Why don't you want to do the dare??? Whats the problem???!!!" Aniee confronted her outside.

"You can't force me okay." Geet replied with her back to her.

"I am forcing you??!!! You love my bhai right??!! Why don't you tell him that!!!!!"

Geet was stunned hearing that. Aniee waited for an answer. Geet formed her hands into fists.

"She is right!!!! Maan hasn't patched up with Simi & I know he WONT!!!!! I was never a reason for their break-up so why should I even care of Simi!!!  I LOVE Maan!!!!!"

Possessiveness & insanity had dominated Geet. She had lost her rational thinking, she didn't know what was right & what was wrong as she found it very hard to deny her feelings which were as strong as intoxication...a passion...She was in a trance...


On the terrace, Maan was talking on phone to a client when Geet came there. He ended the call & turned around. He was startled to see her there as he didn't know her group had come to the same restaurant.

The velvety black sky seemed an abode for the tiny twinkling starts & the passionate Moon. Some clouds also lurked around as if deciding whether to produce rain or not. The meandering wind made it's way through her soft & silky long hair taking his heart into craze. His enchanted eyes desirously soaked in her beauty as she walked to him.

Aniee hide behind the door to watch what would happen.

Geet came & stood stood way too close to him & looked straight in the eye.  Before he could react, she threw herself on him & hugged him possessively...Her heart throbbed mercilessly as she planted a deep kiss on his neck...That snatched his breath miles away & affected him beyond his sanity. He was lost in a passionate reverie. His beats shook violently after registering the fact that Geet had actually kissed him. He was aroused to no extent...The feel of her soft & luscious lips drenched his entire being in the raging fire of love for her which made his eyes intense with passion...

Seeing her brother so hopelessly lost in Geet, Aniee smiled cheekily,

"I think I'm not censored to watch what might happen next. So better leave them alone."

She silently left from there.

Geet parted herself from him.

"It was just a dare." She said in a low voice, diverting her gaze.

She prepared to leave but he clutched her wrist & yanked her closer. Her body pressed against his & her hands landed on his shoulders. Her eyes locked with his dark once & she found it too difficult to withdraw from his intoxicating gazes...

"But it was much more to me."

His dense hoarse whisper reverberated in her ears. She squirmed against his steel torso when he slowly trailed his index finger from her temple to the chin & she felt his hands sliding down to circle her waist. The little distance between their lips was reducing every passing second. She closed her eyes not wanting to miss any feeling he was making her feel...Her hands shifted to his nape & the next split second, Maan slammed his lips on hers.

As soon as their lips collided, their hearts vibrated in sync & exploded into flames of passion, triggered by love. Her senses turned hysteric as he invoked a myriad of feelings in her which she never thought she could feel before. His lips moved aggressively over hers feeling their cotton-like softness & savoring their sensual sweetness. He kissed, sucked & nibbled her lips making it difficult for her to match his pace. He was extremely rough & equally gentle both at the same time making her senses to resign...

Maan pinned her to the wall for support sensing her weakening legs. She gasped when he bit her slightly harder & his tongue delved into her mouth to explore the unknown facts in them. Her limp hands clasped him tighter when he probed more into her. His tongue found hers & caressed it in the manner which made her moan limitlessly & then he intertwined his with it. He passionately maneuvered over her raw lips while her tongue flickered over the tip of his lips. He groaned & squeezed her waist, kissing her zealously. He licked her swollen lips with sensual gentleness which made her whimper. She was salivating when his teeth pulled her lower lip into his mouth & his tongue caressed it which made her gasp & moan out 'Maan' in pleasure & breathlessness.

He left her almost bruised & tired lips when air became the most important & urgent necessity for her as well as for him. Maan held her close when her chest heaved up & down to take in all the air provided by the surroundings. Her hooded hazels noticed his lips were swollen as well...& it was then that all her senses were pulled back inside & she realized what just happened between them...Their first kiss...

 He cupped her face, "Geet I L---"

But then didn't hear a thing & pulled herself away from him. She looked at him horrified, not knowing what to do...

"Sab galat hai...sab...sab kuch..." she breathed heavily as tears formed in her hazels. How could she be so selfish? She had no right to snatch him away from Simi who loves him so much.

Geet hated herself & regretted her acts.

"Geet listen I--"  he took a step towards her.

"Stay away from me, understand!!!!!!!!" she moved backwards, "How could you do this???!!!!! She loves you & you---"  her voice was cold & she was  angry on her ownself at the same time.

Maan was shocked at such a reaction. What had happened to her ? Why was she behaving like that?


But she was gone. His eyes ignited in fire as his insides experienced hostility with the fact that she denied her feelings...

"You can't run away everytime have to come back to me always & I will make sure you do!!!!"

Aniee saw Geet hurrying away. She tried to call her but Geet didn't listen.

A little Maan came there. Aniee noticed his lips & smiled quirkily

"I am proposing Geet in a grand way." He announced.

"Woh sab toh thik hai, but I didn't know you put lipsticks!" she taunted.

Maan rubbed his lips with the back of his hand & saw the red gloss. He smirked passionately...



 Geet's eyes were numb with tears. She was overflowing with regret & guilt. No one had given her the right to come between Simi & Maan.

Her heart was already broken & she doubted whether it could be mended. She experienced emotions of painfulness surging through her. How can she be so cruel to someone?

Geet dug her head in the pillow & tried to sleep...the pillow soaked her tears...